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Steal My Copy

In part three of our ‘Steal My Copy feature’ we’ve got three letters to send to potential new customers. Remember, you are free to mercilessly steal some or all of these letters and use them in your own business, as well as editing them to meet your particular needs.


The ‘Seven Reasons’ New Customer Letter. 
This is referred to in the ‘Seven Golden Rules of Writing Great Copy’ seminar



Dear

There are a thousand mortgage brokers for you to choose from. You know that and I know that. So I would like to show you seven reasons why I am asking for you to give me the privilege of working with you to find the mortgage that will work best for you.
  1. The reassurance that your mortgage is in safe hands. I have been helping people like yourself for ten years and know the mortgage business inside out.
  2. My expertise means that I will work for you relentlessly to secure the lowest cost mortgage available
  3. My XYZ system means that I can check thousands of possible mortgages to ensure that you get the one that best suits your needs
  4. If you have had any type of credit problems or been refused a mortgage in the past, don’t worry. I have access to special mortgages where past problems are not a major issue.
  5. It will cost you nothing to work with me. My fee comes from the mortgage company.
  6. I guarantee you personal attention. I will return your calls and emails promptly and do whatever it takes to make your property purchase a success.
  7. So that you can put me to the test, I offer you a free no obligation consultation during which I will ascertain whether I can help you and you can decide if I am the person to help you secure your new home.

If you have any further questions or would like to book your free consultation, please call me on xxxx or email me at ….

Yours etc


The Bullet Point New Customer Letter                              



Dear 

If having a beautiful home – and a home that increases in value is important to you, (replace with the highest need that your product/service meets) then I hope you will take a couple of minutes to read the enclosed brochures about XYZ conservatories.

There are many conservatory companies for you to choose from, but only XYZ provides the reassurance, quality and care for your home that has made us the region’s first choice for high quality conservatories for three decades.

Here are just some of the ways that a stunning XYZ conservatory can be of benefit to you: (You will obviously need to insert your own bullet points – focus on the key benefits that you offer).
  • Your conservatory will be custom built to match your home perfectly
  • Our 25 year reputation means that your home and your new conservatory are in the safest hands
  • Your project is backed by the XYZ 100% guarantee.
  • Increasing the value of your home – a new conservatory typically adds X per cent to the price of a home in your area
  • Easy payment – By spreading the cost of your new conservatory over several months/years you can experience all the benefits of a new conservatory without it hurting your pocket!
  • More Space – Your new XYZ conservatory will free up space, increase the size of your home and 
  • Luxury – We believe that our Conservatories are the finest available – our sole focus is to provide you with the level of luxury that you deserve 

(Call to action) Please call me today and I will ensure that one of my Customer Service Directors gives you a free, no obligation quote. You can reach me on xxxxx or email me at xxxxx


Yours



The 'I'm going to call you' New Customer Letter.              



If you are planning a telemarketing campaign, writing to your prospects ahead of your call, perhaps with a brochure or free article is one effective strategy (although by no means essential) If you are going to do this, it is worth using the letter to encourage them to contact you, while leaving open the option of you contacting them. In this letter we’re adding a headline to grab their attention.




Why Most Business Training Does Not Work

Dear,

As a Human Resource professional, I am sure that you receive dozens of brochures from training companies telling you how great corporate training is.

As you are probably aware, most of them are talking nonsense, so instead I am sending you a special article on why most Corporate training is a total waste of time.

If you find the article of interest, I would like to request a five minute phone call with you, for me to explain why the training that XYZ offers is very different to what you may be used to and how it produces stunning results.

You can reach me on …… Alternatively, I will call you in a few days for a brief chat.

Yours etc



This letter is short and to the point. It wont appeal to everyone but most people who receive it will read it ….. and for a percentage of them, it will stick in their mind so that when you call, they’ll be curious about what you have to offer. It’s designed to break their patterned thinking. Remember, if you have corporate customers, their world may well be traditional and somewhat dull. Telling ‘the truth’ to people in these environments is a very effective strategy.

Of course, you can substitute the words ‘Business Training’ for virtually anything any you’ve got yourself your own letter.

There'll be plenty more letters, email, brochures and website copy for you to steal in the months ahead - so stay tuned!


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