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Email One
Email to Existing Customer For a New Offer

Use your emails to give people advance news on new product/service launches. Make the members of your list feel special


Dear

I/we wanted to give advance notice of something special that is going to make a significant difference to your ……….

One of the biggest challenges people face is ……….. (list problem/need) 

The (product/service) addresses this by (list how it solves problems)

You can expect to pay XX for this type of ZZ and our normal price will be XX.

But I mean what I say when I tell you that I value your custom so I want to offer this to you at the special price/rate of xxxxxx

This offer is available for 48 hours. Please call me on xxxxx or you can also order online at xxxxx and I look forward to helping you (list benefit)

Yours etc

This is a simple, straightforward email that gets to the point, makes an explicit offer and has a call to action. Don’t fall into the trap of thinking that you email communications need to be complicated. Simplicity is power.




Email Two
When People sign up to your List

This is an email for when people join your newsletter or sign up from your website for any reports etc that you’re offering


Dear

I wanted to send you a quick ‘thank you’ for visiting my site and joining my ABC Newsletter.

The purpose of this newsletter is to make a real difference to your (insert as appropriate, eg life, business, health, tax planning etc) by providing you with the latest, leading edge information on XYZ

In the weeks ahead I will make sure that you have everything you need to ……. And ensure that your ……. is a success / 

I / My colleagues and I are also always here to assist you personally. If you have any questions about …….please do not hesitate to get in touch. You can email me at (email address) or call me on my direct line which is ………..

And we always have a wealth of fascinating material for you at www.websiteaddress.com

Thank you again. I look forward to a long and fulfilling relationship

Yours etc


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Website address



Ideally at the same time that people join your newsletter and get the above thank you, they should receive your first ‘value added’ message. They’ll be expecting you to sell them something so DON’T. Give them some useful information that can make a difference to their lives. It doesn’t matter what you sell, you have knowledge and expertise that can make a difference.


Email Three
Information Email

So here’s an example for an information email from an Estate Agent. If we can get a reader to feel good about their Estate Agent, we can do anything, right?

The ‘content’ of this email is irrelevant for you. I am using it as an illustration for you of how you will build a stronger relationship with your list through giving information, than from normal selling. Whatever business you are in, you have valuable information that can make a real difference to peoples’ lives, so use it.


Dear

As a member of my VIP list, I want to provide you with everything I can to make your property sale a success. With continued uncertainty in the market, the specific steps you take to prepare your home for a sale can make an enormous difference to the price you achieve.

It is no exaggeration to say that if you follow the steps in this email, they could be worth thousands to you. Having seen countless homes during my 20 years in the industry, I know what sells – and what doesn’t. Here are the five most important steps you can take to prepare your house for a sale:

1 Decorate in Neutral Colours. Whatever the design experts say, neutral colours sell – wild and wacky does not. If you are about to sell your house, now would be a great time to paint your teenage son’s black gothic bedroom a lovely shade of beige!

2 Clear out the Clutter. You want to give the impression that your home is an easy, spacious place to live in, so get rid of the clutter. If you want to sell your home and move quickly – clearing out the clutter is the best move you can make.

3 Maximise the Bedrooms. If you are currently using the bedrooms for offices, store rooms etc, consider converting them back into bedrooms with for the sale. Although your prospective buyers will know they they are potential bedrooms, you are selling an experience, so don’t leave hour sale up to your buyer’s imagination.

4 Lock up the Smelly Pets! If you have them, you may love them but your buyers may not. Send them to a friend or relative so that you can show your viewers your home without having to worry about where the cat is.

5 Consider ‘staging’ your home. If you really want to get the maximum sale price, consider hiring in furniture, accessories, plasma TVs etc to convey the finest possible lifestyle experience. Staging sells – and if you would like me to recommend someone to assist you, please get in touch.

As usual, I am here to assist with all of your property needs and questions. If there is anything I can help with, please email me or call me direct on XXXXX

Yours etc


Remember: This will not be a one off email. It will be one in a series that potential sellers receive from our friendly estate agent. What effect do you think that will have on their business over a period of weeks and months. You can apply the same principle to your business today. 


Email Four
Another Information Email

Here’s the first information people receive when they join my VIP Newsletter on my main site. You may have received it as well. Note, it’s not selling anything – it’s adding value

Dear 

Of all the ways to waste money on Marketing, advertising seems to be everyone's favourite - so today we're looking at how to get better results from your advertising.

First - be aware that there are many more effective ways to market than just advertising. In my experience, many businesses depend too heavily on advertising, when there are many more effective ways to market. In addition, advertising can be one of the most expensive marketing options. So I would always look at more cost effective marketing strategies before we get to advertising. But if you are advertising already, or plan to in the future, here are some basics on what works and what doesn't.

First of all, stop any advertising that isn't working.
That may sound ridiculously obvious but you would be amazed at how many people are running ads just because that's what their business has always done and they don't really know whether the ads are working.

Secondly, you wont know whether the ads are working unless you test and measure all of your advertising. I spoke about testing last time - but it's so important. So many businesses just allocate a certain amount of money to an advertising budget, spend the money every year…and they've only got a vague sense of whether the ads are working or not. This is crazy. If your ads are working, you want to roll them out on a larger scale. If they're not, STOP and use the money on one of the dozens of other marketing strategies that can bring you a 100 or 200 or 300% return on your investments.

Third, only run ads that are going to produce a response. This is known as direct response advertising. The other form of advertising is institutional (or brand) advertising. This is what Coca-Cola and McDonalds engage in. It's designed to build and sustain awareness of their brand. If you're in a small or medium sized business, brand advertising is almost certainly a huge waste of money.

Unless you're a global multi national, the purpose of your ads must be to produce a response. Smart marketers are ruthless in only creating and paying for ads that produce a response - a profitable response.

In the ad itself the most important element is the headline. The headline is either the heading that goes at the top of the ad or if there's no heading it's the first words of the ad. The headline needs to grab peoples' attention. One change in a headline can produce a 50 -100% increase in response. (TIP: If the headline of your ad is currently the name of your company, you can almost certainly increase the response rate by changing the headline.)

The copy of your ad needs to be a personal communication to the individual reading it. And it needs to be about them. It needs to address their needs, desires and fears and it needs to constantly communicate the benefits of what you are offering. At the end of the ad you need a call to action. Tell people exactly what they need to do to follow through and make it easy for them to do so.

Here are some other fundamentals of advertising: Don't advertise on a left hand page. This has been tested again and again. When you read a publication, your eyes are drawn to the right hand page as you flick through, so statistically more people will see your ad if it's on the right hand page.

Never pay the full rate for advertising. Most advertising rate cards are far too high and you can always negotiate. If you're a small business remember that large companies who use ad agencies are buying based on the readership or audience levels rather than the ratecard - so haggle and negotiate. If you can pay 20 or 30% less for your advertising it can sometimes turn an unprofitable ad campaign into a successful one.

One of the biggest mistakes people make is advertising in publications just because their competitors are in them. Don't for a minute think that all your competitors are there because their ads are producing great results. They're more likely to be there because everyone else is and most of them wont have a clue whether their ads are working. The only criteria for advertising anywhere is if the ad produces great results for you.

Once again, my experience when I first start working with clients is that many businesses are wasting money on ineffective advertising when they could be getting a much better return on other forms of marketing (Direct Mail, Telephone Marketing, Direct Sales, Email, Internet, Referrals, Strategic Alliances etc) But if you do it well and test and experiment, advertising can become a highly profitable element of your marketing mix.

For more Marketing information visit www.CardellMedia.co.uk.

Feel free to pass this email onto anyone who will find it useful. If they receive this message and want to join the newsletter, they need to go to www.CardellMedia.co.uk/vip.htm to sign up.

Happy Marketing!

Best wishes

Chris Cardell
www.CardellMedia.co.uk
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